Yay, you finished! And now Sal has introduced me to who Chuck is, so I even had a little context! :D

First, psst - "Tim tucks Chuck's dick once more" - I think you meant tug.

Next, Squeee! This was a great blend of humor and rough guyness limned with Chuck's vulnerability. Even not knowing the players, you painted them so vividly I could happily play along!