That first scene between Caroline and her father is really sweet. I love the dialogue to bits and it made me sad to think he won't be there to see her on that parade in the S1 finale, and that her dress is yellow not green. And Liz leaving even though it's Caroline's birthday.
The second scene was chilling. My heart was pounding all the way through. And I loved the tiny reference to Liz-Damon friendship.
OMG WONDERFUL SCENE!!! Every character choice is so spot on!! And I love the dialogue to bits. And Caroline got her green dress and all, yaay! :) And STEPHEN!!! I love Stephen!!! (No it doesn't matter we never met him, I still do)
God, it never gets easier watching Tyler transform. *hugs him* Oh this is so exciting!!!
That 16th birthday scene is wonderful. I love the tidbits you give about their lives before everything went pear-shaped. And everybody is so perfectly in character and yet younger. And the whole running Gone with the wind parallel is awesome!!
Oh nooo! Tyler. Oh oh oh, how terrible!! *hugs Caroline*
Oh god... ok, first of all, Elena feeding on deer = wonderfully creepy. The "Bunny?" "Bag." bit made shivers run down my spine. And I LOVE post Klaus defeat apocalypse type of fic. Where everything just falls into pieces. OMG Klaus compelling Katherine to stake Stefan!!!! I think I died a little at that. And oh no Liz and Matt. And Alaric - it's terrible that he's not even killed by someone "special", if you know what I mean. :( But at least Bonnie's death was meaningful. And Jeremy's death was very clever. And Elena's transformation, wow, could it have been any more messed up? - Elijah forcing her to feed on Alaric. I'm with Damon, I would have lost it at that too. Fabulous twist!
And I ADORED the bits in italics all through the story. Really sexy and then it ended in a great scene. "Orgasms on demand and Gone with the Wind all day." I loved this line, made me laugh. And I loved Caroline's final conclusion about Scarlett and Melanie.
Great fic dear, and what a wonderful start of the fic exchange! Thank you again for participating and writing this for us.
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The second scene was chilling. My heart was pounding all the way through. And I loved the tiny reference to Liz-Damon friendship.
OMG WONDERFUL SCENE!!! Every character choice is so spot on!! And I love the dialogue to bits. And Caroline got her green dress and all, yaay! :) And STEPHEN!!! I love Stephen!!! (No it doesn't matter we never met him, I still do)
God, it never gets easier watching Tyler transform. *hugs him* Oh this is so exciting!!!
That 16th birthday scene is wonderful. I love the tidbits you give about their lives before everything went pear-shaped. And everybody is so perfectly in character and yet younger. And the whole running Gone with the wind parallel is awesome!!
Oh nooo! Tyler. Oh oh oh, how terrible!! *hugs Caroline*
Oh god... ok, first of all, Elena feeding on deer = wonderfully creepy. The "Bunny?" "Bag." bit made shivers run down my spine. And I LOVE post Klaus defeat apocalypse type of fic. Where everything just falls into pieces. OMG Klaus compelling Katherine to stake Stefan!!!! I think I died a little at that. And oh no Liz and Matt. And Alaric - it's terrible that he's not even killed by someone "special", if you know what I mean. :( But at least Bonnie's death was meaningful. And Jeremy's death was very clever. And Elena's transformation, wow, could it have been any more messed up? - Elijah forcing her to feed on Alaric. I'm with Damon, I would have lost it at that too. Fabulous twist!
And I ADORED the bits in italics all through the story. Really sexy and then it ended in a great scene. "Orgasms on demand and Gone with the Wind all day." I loved this line, made me laugh. And I loved Caroline's final conclusion about Scarlett and Melanie.
Great fic dear, and what a wonderful start of the fic exchange! Thank you again for participating and writing this for us.